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 Post subject: Orange Juice and Biscuits Flyer
PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 9:07 pm 
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This is another flyer I finally finished that's for one of the radio shows on campus. The biscuits, plate and glass are from a photo I took to figure out an arrangement for the flyer. I don't really like the plate's colors, but it's really bothersome to try and edit it out. So, it is what it is.

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 Post subject: Orange Juice and Biscuits Flyer
PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 5:12 am 
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Eh, I'll be honest with you... I'm not crazy for this one. I liked the giraffe one more. Lol

Still good though. I'm just not liking the table-cloth and the plate as well.

Also, I think the text should be straight, and aligned with the "AJ and Jonny V." text. The text near the radio seems a bit out of place and random to me. Especially with the text of when it's on right next to it in the OJ glass. But that one's cute. ^^; I'm also not crazy for how the biscuits are more blurred and somewhat realistic looking. It sort of doesn't match the OJ and radio to me. I dunno'.

Overall: 7.5/10~

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I like it :], I like everything except the plate lol. But other than that this ad if pretty good. 8.5/10

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 Post subject: Re: Orange Juice and Biscuits Flyer
PostPosted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 1:12 am 
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Alex wrote:
I'm also not crazy for how the biscuits are more blurred and somewhat realistic looking. It sort of doesn't match the OJ and radio to me. I dunno'.

Aye, I agree there. My issues with this biscuits and plate is that I can't really transform it easily like I did with everything else. Also I had some Illustrators issues. For some reason not all of the file gets saved to the disk I write it on. =/

I like the text how it is though.

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I like it :], I like everything except the plate lol. But other than that this ad if pretty good. 8.5/10

Arigatou. Yep, the plate is teh sux.

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 Post subject: Biscuits Issue
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Chrystal wrote:
Aye, I agree there. My issues with this biscuits and plate is that I can't really transform it easily like I did with everything else. Also I had some Illustrators issues. For some reason not all of the file gets saved to the disk I write it on. =/

Aww, that's a shame. But it's still really good, so it's not like I hate it. ^^;
Just thought the other was nicer, that's all. ^_^

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 Post subject: Re: Biscuits Issue
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Alex wrote:
Aww, that's a shame. But it's still really good, so it's not like I hate it. ^^;
Just thought the other was nicer, that's all. ^_^

I finally made some headway today and edited that part. I think it's a lot better now:

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yeah ew, stupid bot. -kicks him-

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 Post subject: Biscuit Graphic Edited
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Ooo, that one is much nicer! The plate is SO much better! Grand job, deary. ^_^

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 Post subject: Re: Biscuit Graphic Edited
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Alex wrote:
Ooo, that one is much nicer! The plate is SO much better! Grand job, deary. ^_^

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